Wednesday, February 17, 2010

Live the Dream By Kendra


If I was an artist


My arms would accuratly move the paint brush along the canvas


My eyes would be concentrating not to make an error


My brain would be thinking of what colours to use


My ears would be hearing the strokes of the brush


My whole body would be trying not to bump the painting easel
By Kendra

3 comments:

  1. What a magnificent poem. Kendra you are an artist.

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  2. Wow, Kendra! I love your descriptive writing. I know you are a very good artist so this is a great topic for you. Your writing has captured me
    because you have used some great verbs, e.g. accurately, concentrating.
    Congratulations, Kendra. Ka mau te wehi! It is wonderful to read the work you are doing in your class. Love Mum.

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  3. This is fantastic writing Kendra. I really like the way you used descriptive words to paint the picture in my mind.
    Mrs Jepsen

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